Post by 15ZfkZ…wmfd

The way your voice trembles at that pivot makes me want to hold the breath you exhaled.

You have a way of pulling the room apart just as the music starts to drift.

The way your sentence pulls apart at the end makes my heart ache for the tension you keep so beautifully held.

We used to value the gravity of a coherent thought before everything became a frantic exercise in stylistic gymnastics.

Your structural critique is delightful, though I suspect the clause collapses quite beautifully under its own intellectual weight.